Third omniscient perspective

A man who is soccer player wants to show his game to his girlfriend. So he invited her to his game, and he got ready to the match.
In the day, he felt good because of perfect condition. Also, his girlfriend invited expectation about his activities.
As soon as game started, he got a chance that he can score a goal. He wants to score a goal because his girlfriend was looking him and he hope to show nice appeareance to her. But he yielded the chance to his company for more sure goal. In half time, he caught his girlfriend's eye. And she had a gace wreathed in smiles. So he started second half of play under steam. Before 5 minutes the close of the match, finally he had one more chance to score a goal. And he didn't miss the opportunity. As soon as he score a goal, he had a sweet ceremony to her. She was so happy that she shouted to him and people around her surprised. Soon, they noticed that she is the player's girlfriend and congratulated to them. After the game, he met his girlfriend. Many fans envied them. They were very happy.

Reflections on my reporting assignments.

My report's problem is to dividing paragraphs. Originally paragraph is shared whenever contents are changed. But my report didn't practiced relatively.
Also my friend says that picture is very bigger than needs. Because of the picture, my writing looks inharmonious. So, if I have smaller picture, it is better to match up with my writing.
Lasyly, I only wrote facts about the issue. If I wrote more information and my opinion about issue, the report is more perfect. I feel something wanting about that.

a short summary of the "addresses" article

 10년간의 혼란 끝에 한국은 기존 주소표기 방식을 버리고 길이름과 번지수를 기본으로 하는 새로운 방식을 도입했다. 이러한 새로운 주소표기 방식에 대한 시민들의 의견은 제각기 천차만별이다.
 새로운 방식에 찬성하는 사람들은 일제강점기 때 겪었던 고통과 유산을 제거할 뿐 아니라 기존의 혼란을 기존의 혼란을 제거할 수 있다고 한다. 반대로, 새로운 표기법에 반대하는 사람들은 우리의 전통성과 역사와 관련된 명칭을 함부로 손대는 것은 옳지 못한 것이라 주장한다. 전통적 이름에는 그 지역만의 고유한 역사적 의미 및 생활환경이 담겨있다고 생각하기 때문이다. 또한 오랜 시간 사용해 온 표기법을 갑자기 생소한 표기법으로 대체한다면 어려움이 생기게 되기 때문에 이러한 혼란을 방지하기 위해서는 기존의 표기법을 그대로 사용하는 것이 더 낫다고 생각한다.
 나는 새로운 표기법에 대해 반대한다. 새로운 표기는 이해하기 어렵고 그를 외우기 위해서는 시간도 많이 걸릴 것이다. 그 뿐 아니라 우리의 고유한 전통과 문화적인 의미를 지켜냈으면 하는 바램 때문이다.

reflections about my descriptive writing

In my descriptive writing, my topic is Japan trip with my mother. I want that readers get to know about Japan and feel being full of life. The trip is chance that I become more intimate with my mother and felt my things.
My writing was organized with my feeling before trip, experience and senses in trip. I want to convey my feelings that are seeing and touching. Because I wrote about tourist spot, so I want to give feeling that is especially seeing. But my writing couldn't express many senses like tastes, smell... I feel something lacking about that. So next time, I will try to express many senses.
Lastly, my writing was written for particular audience who loves trip or wants to travel Japan. But next time, I want to write for everyone. For example, useful thing in practical life is good for everyone.

My "Face" Descriptions

My facial form is an egg-shaped face.
My eyes are big and I have heavy double eyelid.
I have syringoma under my two eyes so they are my complexes.
I have prominent cheekbones like two eggs.
My nose have a dot and it had been called luck dot from old times.
I have thick lips. It takes after my father.
I have curly black hair. It is fine and silky hair so I try to maintain it.

Homework for September 21st

Today, I ate  steamed chicken for lunch with my friends. The chicken was boiled down with soy sauce, potatoes, noodles and vegetables. As soon as I see the food, I swallowed my saliva. It was so delicious that I feel the food melt away in the mouth. Also, my friends said that it is like cotton candy. I enjoyed happy lunch time.

If I died tomorrow, I want to travel with my family. Long time ago, I visited China with my family. That is very pleasant and memorable time.
If I died tomorrow, I want to marry my boy friend. When I was young, I thought that life's greatest happiness is marrying my lover. So I want to have my happy domestic relations.
Lastly, I hope to host a party with my friends. Family and boy friend is very precious people, of course. Also, friends are important people to me. So I want to have a party with them.